My diet life - An announcement
Six years ago, I was pregnant. My husband and I were extremely happy with that. In my country, when a woman gets pregnant, other family members and friends will provide a lot of delicious dishes and nutrition. While pregnancy, these women don't allowed to do much exercise or carry weight.
To the end, when I gave birth to my daughter, I was 20 kilometers more than the weight I wasn't pregnant. I feel my healthy getting worse since then. That's why I want to go on a diet and loss my weight.
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My diet life - An announcement
Six years ago, I was pregnant. My husband and I were extremely happy with that. In my country, when a woman gets pregnant, other family members and friends will provide a lot of delicious dishes and nutrition. During pregnancy, these women aren't allowed to do much exercise or gain weight.In the end, when I gave birth to my daughter, I was 20 kilograms heavier than when I wasn't pregnant. I feel my health getting worse since then. That's why I want to go on a diet and lose my weight.
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Hello Kerry! Good job here! Indeed losing weight is always a dilemma for women! Let's go over some of your word choices:
- We use DURING to talk about all through a period of time ex During winter or During my college days. We use WHILE to talk about something else happening at the same time ex You can eat while I sleep. He slept while on the train.
- to CARRY something is to lift something, to GAIN something is to obtain something
- kilometers talks about distance while kilogtams talks about weight
- HEALTHY is the adjective, HEALTH is the noun
Hope this helps!
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My diet life - An announcement
Six years ago, I was became pregnant. My husband and I were extremely happy with that. In my country, when a woman gets becomes pregnant, other family members and friends will provide a lot of many delicious and nutritional dishes and nutrition. While During pregnancy, these women don't aren't allowed to do much exercise much or carry much weight.
To In the end, when I gave birth to my daughter, I was 20 kilometers more kilograms heavier (<--"Kilometers" 是“公里”。) than the weight I wasn't before pregnancy. I feel my healthy has been getting worse since then. That's This is why I want to go on a diet and lose my weight.
祝你减肥好运，Kerry =)
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