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Lighthouse Taiwan have totally 36 lighthouse dotted around the coast,Taiwan first lighthouse was built in Tamsui in 17 centry,many of boats were guided by those importantly building in rough ocean,today lighthouse has become beautiful landmark of tourism,but some of them are still in use. Every year, many peoplo fluct into those iconic for various reason,like tour,marry or take a great view,whatever how far from you. Don't miss those important building in your next tripe,If you visit Taiwan not completely without see one of this lighthouse.

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Lighthouses

Taiwan has a total of 36 lighthouses dotted around its coast. The first lighthouse was built in Tamsui in the 17th century, and over the years, many boats were guided safely to land from the rough ocean by these important buildings. Today, most of these lighthouses have become beautiful landmarks for tourism, but some of them are actually still in use. Every year, many people flood into these iconic structures for various reasons such as part of a tour, to marry, or to merely take in a great view. If you should come to Taiwan over your next trip, do not miss the opportunity to visit these historic buildings as your visit will not truly be complete without seeing and exploring one of these unique lighthouses in person.

Hi Mos. Good job. Overall, a nice post as to content, but pay more attention to your subject-verb agreement, your spelling, and your punctuation. Whatever other changes I made to your sentences was done merely to allow them to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.  P.S. Nice picture!

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Lighthouse

Taiwan have has a totally total of 36 lighthouses dotted around the coast.Taiwan's first lighthouse was built in Tamsui in the 17 centry, century. Many of the boats were guided by those importantly buildings in the rough ocean. Today the lighthouses has have become a beautiful landmark of tourism, but although some of them are still in use.
Every year, many people fluct flood into those iconic buildings for various reasons, like tours, to get married or to take in a great view, whatever how far from you. however far they live. 
Don't miss seeing those important buildings in your next tripe. If you visit Taiwan, your trip will not be  be complete not completely without see one of this these lighthouses.

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