Football and money...
220 billions of euros....it's the price that the football club of Paris St Germain has paid to buy the bresilian player Neymar.
A recent study made by the UNO and published in 2006 explains that a such amount could reduce by 10% the hunger in the world...Every day 30 000 children die in the world because of famine and lack of care...
This amount is as crazy as our world is become too.
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Football and money...
220 billions of euros....it's the price that the football club of Paris St Germain has paid to buy the bresilian Brazilian player Neymar.A recent study made by the UNO and published in 2006 explains that a such an amount could reduce by 10% the hunger in the world by 10%... Every day 30,000 children die in the world because of famine and lack of care...
This amount is as crazy as our world is has become too.
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Football and money...
220 billions of Euros....it's the price that the football club of Paris St Germain has paid to buy the Brazilian player Neymar.A recent study conducted by the UNO and published in 2006 explains that a such an amount could reduce hunger in the world by 10% ...Every day 30 000 children die in the world because of famine and lack of care...
This amount is as crazy as our world has become too.
Very well written, just made a few minor grammar corrections and some style recommendations.
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You're right, but i think at least football player are running and getting exhausted for money. But i don't think those kind of couple loving soap oprea "shemale" actors getting tired for earning money. This world is really becoming crazy!
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