simple journal, please help me about my writting.
13/08/2017 Grace’s Journal
This weekend ， the 2 days are all rainy.
on Friday night ,there has a big thunder storm, when I came back to my room after work, I found out there are a lot of water on the floor, but I am pretty sure when I go to work, I closed the window, and I checked it again, it does closed, maybe it because the rain is too heavy. It takes me 1 hour to clean the floor, and the hard wood floor seemed to be bump up .
on Saturday morning , I went to the park for morning exercising, I saw there has 3 trees pulled out of the groud, even I can see the root of the tree.
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simple journal, please help me about (with) my writting (writing).
13/08/2017 Grace’s JournalThis weekend ， the 2 days are (were)* all rainy.
on Friday night ,there has (was) a big thunder storm, when I came back to my room after work, I found out there are (was) a lot of water on the floor, but I am pretty sure when I go (went) to work, I closed the window, and I checked it again, it does (was) closed, maybe it's ** because the rain is too heavy. It takes (took) me 1 hour to clean the floor, and the hard wood floor seemed to be bump up .
on Saturday morning , I went to the park for morning exercising (a morning exercise), I saw there has (were) 3 trees pulled out of the groud (ground), even I can even see the root of the tree.
* Though not incorrect grammatically, it sounds strange, because you're talking about the past two days.
** A verb was needed here
Most of your mistakes seem to be that you change your tense and not being sure when to use "to be". Try to pay attention to that next time. All in all it's a good text though. Keep up the good work!
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