I feel tired Hello, my name is Adrian, i have twenty years old, actually i study two careers, i want say that my first career is Law, in the past i did not agree because my family want it (my brother

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I feel tired Hello, my name is Adrian, i have twenty years old, actually i study two careers, i want say that my first career is Law, in the past i did not agree because my family want it (my brother is attorney) and i know that in this career not have mathematic or physical, my true interest but now i accepted this career, i'm sixth semester of Law, i worked as a legal assistant and i knew the environment, is simply nice, knew great persons too, for this i read full to learn because i understand the responsability that have an attorney but inside of me, i think... ¿where was the taste for math or physical? I study law in a private university and distance mode. But i stopped to think..i would like look at me in a course with companions of class, for that reason i now find at me stuying engineer, i can choose other stuff but in my work a person speak me about programs of computer to world of engineers and i want believe that was a signal of the life to me. I left to my work to study the second career (engineer), i stay in the seconde semester but i now just bit sleep, i think.. good, is for the combination of theory and the calculation, i'm confunsed, ¿i will continue with this? i don't have poblems with numbers (calculation in general) but is the amount of time that this implies, my actual problem is "technical draw" i do construction plans but my teacher send me to repeat the plan, and i'm slow whit the construction plans, i feel sadness because i remember my speed or the time employee in the plan. My actually strength is in the friend that i do while i study engineer, they supported me, i have apreciattion with they, i don't think the same with my family because my family not is agree with me in engineer, they said just follow Law. I want finished two careers but i recognize that is tired. I'm in a dilema if continue or left... after of leave my ex-work, my time free and just speak with persons about your interests but they not my friends. Sorry, i think that i wrote a lot but is to practice, thanks for your correction if you dare.

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I don't think feel the same with about my family because my family does not is agree with me in pursuing engineering. They think that I should just get the law degree.

I want to have finished two careers, but i recognize see now that I am is tired.

I'm in a dilemma if I should continue or leave... After I left my job, my time free and just speak with persons about your interests but they not my friends. (I am not sure what you wanted to say here - if you try to reword it for me, I can help you.)

Sorry, I think that I wrote a lot. But this is to so that I could practice. Thanks for your correction - if you dare.

Hello Adrian! First of all - sorry I had to break it up in parts - it would not allow me to write over a certain number of characters.

I have a few comments for you:
1. I is written in capital letters. (Then I went to the store. NOT Then i went to the store.)
2. Break sentences up. They are quite long and make it more difficult for us to understand.
3. I have a few spots I did not quite comprehend what you wanted to say - if you can reword those, I would gladly help you.

Otherwise, if you need any more help learning English, feel free to contact me! You're on a good path! :)

PART 1:

I feel tired

Hello, my name is Adrian. I am twenty years old. I study so that I could have two careers. My first major is Law. In the past I did not want to pursue law because my family wanted it (my brother is an attorney). I knew that this vocation does not have any aspect of mathematics or physics to it, which are my true interests. But, now I have accepted this career. I'm currently in my sixth semester at Law School. I already worked as a legal assistant. I got to know the environment, which is nice, and I got to know great people, too. I read a lot in order to learn because I understand the responsibility that I have as an attorney. However, inside I wonder... What happened to math and physics? I study law at a private university and distance mode online.

PART 2:

But I stopped thinking... I would like to see myself sitting in a classroom with peers. For that reason I now find myself studying engineering. I can choose other stuff but in my work a person speaks to me about computer programs to world of engineers and I want to believe that that was a signal of the life to me. (It is unclear to me what you wanted to say here. I can help you if you try to break it down into smaller sentences and say it differently, perhaps?)

I left to my work in order to study for my other career (engineering). I endured through the seconde semester, but i now I am just a bit sleepy, I think... Good, is for the combination of theory and the calculation. (This is unclear as well.) I'm confunsed, ¿i will should I continue with this? I don't have problems with numbers (calculation in general) but is the amount of time that this necessitates. My actual problem is "technical drawing". I do construction plans but my teacher asks me to repeat the plan, and I'm slow with the construction plans. I feel sadness because I remember my speed or the time employee in the plan. (Do you mean that you remember the speed that you used to have?)

I find my actually strength happiness in the friends that I have in my engineering department. They supported me, and I appreciate them.

No puedo corregir todo pero quiero decir que recuerdes que en ingles nosotros decimos "yo siempre" en lugar de "siempre yo" y deberiamos decir "yo realmente" no "realmente yo" como ustedes dicen en espanol. Tambien decimos soy vientidos no tengo vientidos anos. Es gracioso que tienes los mismos problemas que yo tengo cuando hablo/escribo espanol pero al reves. (yo se que no inclui ningun acento) si cometi algunos errores, corrigeme

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