My best friends I want to tell you about my best friends. She is very beautiful. She care about me every time. She is the person who know me best. When I am upset she can feel it, she call me and make

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Idris

My best friends I want to tell you about my best friends. She is very beautiful. She care about me every time. She is the person who know me best. When I am upset she can feel it, she call me and make me happy with her voice. She is with me in every term and conditions. She always encourage me for my exams, my work and everything.She thinks me before herself. Don't misunderstand we're not darling. I know her since I born. She fed me when I was a child, protected me from everything that can hurt me, taught me what I need to learn for my life. We love each other and we will love until end of our life. Because she is my best friend and she is my mother.

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My best friend

I want to tell you about my best friend. She is very beautiful. She cares about me all the time. She is the person who knows me best. When I am upset she can feel it, she calls me and makes me happy with her voice. She is with me in every term and condition. She always encourages me for my exams, my work and everything. She thinks about me before herself. Don't misunderstand, we're not darling. I have know her since I was born. She fed me when I was a child, protected me from everything that can hurt me, taught me what I need to learn for my life. We love each other and we will love until end of our life. Because she is my best friend and she is my mother.

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Hi Idris! Great job here! You are such a sweet son! Let's just go over some points:

- I changed friends to friend since we are only talking about one person [singular]

- Be careful with subject-verb agreement in some sentences

- Be careful with some verbs too such as have/was

Hope this helps!

My best friends

I want to tell you about my best friends friend. She is very beautiful. She cares about me every time. She is the person who knows me best. When I am upset she can feel it, she calls me and makes me happy with her voice. She is with me in every term and conditions condition. She always encourages me for my exams, my work and everything. She thinks of me before herself. Don't misunderstand we're not darling. I have known her since I was born. She fed me when I was a child, protected me from everything that can could hurt me, taught me what I needed to learn for my life. We love each other and we will love each other until the end of our life lives. Because she is my best friend and she is my mother.

Nice writing. Be careful and add the 's' when you are talking about a third person (singular) and it will improve your English a lot. Good luck! - Jason

Moms are best and for us they wanted only the best.

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