Autumn

This is my translation from Russian. Please tell me if this completely awful or not.

October has arrived - the groves are still releasing
From their naked branches a few remaining leaves;
Breathed the autumn cold - the road is freezing,
Yet murmurs brook beyond the mills,
But the pond has frozen hard; my neighbor is quickly leaving
For a horse and hound hunt in outlying fields,
And the winter crops suffer from the trot of frenzied hooves,
And wake up barking dogs just hibernated woods.

It is my season now; I don't like early Spring;
I am annoyed by thaw; the slush, the stench - I'm feeling ill;
Brew body juices; senses, mind are strained by ennui.
Iendure much better the nipping winter chill,
I'm fond of winter snows; in moonlight company
How the sledge's weightless run with sweetheart's fast and free, (not really sure what you had in mind here)
When bundled, warm and fresh, in bulky sable furs,
Ablaze, trembling all over, your hand she tightly holds!

TBC

Not bad at all! Just don't forget about those articles :) I know it must be difficult, considering words like "the" and "a" aren't used in the Russian language. If you would like some more help with English, please let me know!  Я бы с удовольствием дала вам уроки. Если что, напишите!