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Hi to everybody
Hi, people everyone! (<--In English, it can be disrespectful to address a group directly as "people.") My name is Joel. and I'm not new here, but I left this page for a long time, and I would like to practice languages again! If you read this and You want to practice your Spanish, English, or even Portuguese (<--English capitalizes names of languages.) just send me a message, and we can practice together!
Welcome back, Joel! =)
Hi to everybody
Hi, everyone! people ! My name is Joel and I'm not new here but I left this site page for a long time and I would like to (1) practise languages again! (2) If you read this and You want to practise your Spanish, English or even Portuguese, (2) just send me a message and we can practise together!Hi Joel,
Welcome back to italki!
Just a few suggestions for your post today:
* There is no spacing between a punctuation mark and the last letter of a previous word. I have highlighted those instances in green for your reference.
(1) This is something which I only recently learned from some American friends on italki. In British English, there is a distinction between "practice" (noun) and "practise" (verb), though "practice" is used as both noun and verb in American English. Since I am more familiar with British English, I took the liberty to replace "practice" with "practise" as you are using to-infinitive here (to practise).
(2) You are using a conditional sentence here. When we introduce the "if" clause in the beginning, there will be a comma to separate the "if" clause from the main clause. (Example: If you read this and want to practise your Spanish, English or even Portugese (if clause), just send me a message and we can practise together. (main clause -- main idea).
Hope these small suggestions that I have shared will be useful for you. Once again, welcome back!
Cheers,
Lance
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