The importance of health
Being health is an continuous condition of
lifes. keeping fitness must do healthy and think of healthy things everyday or will get illness easily.
World Health Organization defines health which is not only keeping away from disease, but also controlling physically, mentally and society all well-being.
The significant of health is for good quality of lifes, and lifes multiply. For the reason, arranging exercise, eating balanced and hanging out with friends, promoting your own spirit, makes yourself an health life is a good way to stay in a wellness condition.
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The importance of health
Being healthy should be a way of life. To keep fit, one must do healthy things and think healthy thoughts everyday or one will fall ill easily. The World Health Organization defines "good health" as not only being free from disease, but also controlling ones physical, mental and social well-being.
The result of staying healthy is a better quality of life for us, our family and for society. For this reason, we should exercise regularly, eat balanced meals and hang out with our friends often to raise our own spirits and stay in a state of wellness always.
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Good Work Ting. Sorry I changed quite a lot, but I tried to keep your original meaning and your words. Hope it helps.
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