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What is your most favorite sport and why? There are lots of fascinating sports in the world. Football, Boxing, Basketball and so on. Each sport have truly royal fans who couldn’t live without those. In my case, Baseball is it. There are two main reasons why I mad about it. First, I have got influenced on my farther. When I was kid, my father always said to me that go to see a Baseball game. Even I couldn’t figure all out the game, he explained each single situation to make my interest in it. Because of my father’s exertion, I became maniac about this sport. Second, Baseball is one of the most delicate and complex sports. It is not just simple throwing & hitting balls. There are many strategies to offend and to defend, and a lot of rules generate magnificent scenes diversely. Of course, I have more hundreds of causes why I like it, these two reasons can’t be separated with my Baseball

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There are lots of fascinating sports in the world. Football, boxing, basketball and so on.  Each sport has truly royal fans who couldn’t live without their favorite sport. In my case, it's baseball. There are two main reasons why I love about it.

First, I was influenced about baseball by on my farther. When I was kid, my father always (encouraged me to go) told me to go see a baseball game. Even though I couldn’t figure out the whole game, my father would explained each play to me and this made me very interested in the game.  (Thanks to) Due to my father’s encouragement, I became a real fan of about this sport.

Second, as a sport, baseball is a basic (simple) and complex at the same time. sports. It's not just simple throwing and hitting balls. There are many strategies of offense and defense, and a lot of rules which generate magnificent scenes diversely. make the game controlled yet exciting.

Of course, I have more than one-hundred reasons why I like baseball, but these are the two big (main) reasons I love the sport.

그건대문자로써야합니다.   
단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             
이건더자연스럽거나더일반적인방법의표현입니다.   
맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.   
제코멘트나 제안입니다.     
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What is your most favorite sport and why?

There are lots of fascinating sports in the world. Football, boxing, basketball and so on. Each sport has truly loyal fans who cannot live without them. In my case, it is baseball. There are two main reasons why I am mad about it.

First, I have got was influenced on by my father. When I was a kid, my father always said to told me to go to see a baseball game. Even I couldn’t figure all out the game, he explained each single situation to make develop my interest in it. Because of my father’s exertion ("exertion" is better replaced with "influence"), I became a maniac about this sport.

Second, baseball is one of the most delicate and complex sports. It is not just simple throwing and hitting balls. There are many strategies to offend attack and to defend, and a lot of rules generate magnificent scenes diversely.

Of course, I have more hundreds of other reasons causes why I like it, but these two reasons can’t separate me from baseball.

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