The heavy rain in South Korea
The Climate of South Korea is being weird.
Usually, June and July is rainy season and most amount of rain falls at these months.
This year, the period of rain fall is extraordinarily short and heavy.
Some cities in Korea ware flooded even though there was a fine drainage.
It seems that hotter summer in Korea affected this strange rain fall.
People say that the worm Earth caused this phenomenon.
Fortunately, here is okay because my city is surrounded by mountains.
It also means that my city is hotter than other region because cool air from other region can't come to this city.
I blamed the topography of my city whole the month June, but it becomes a shield this time.
Now I wish any typhoon come to my country with only little damage.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
1
The heavy rain in South Korea
The Climate of South Korea is being weird.Usually, June and July are rainy season and most amount of rain falls in these months.
This year, the period of rainfall is extraordinarily short and heavy.
Some cities in Korea were flooded even though there was a fine drainage.
It seems that hotter summer in Korea affected this strange rainfall.
People say that the global warming (?) caused this phenomenon.
Fortunately, here is okay because my city is surrounded by mountains.
It also means that my city is hotter than other regions because cool air from other regions can't come to this city.
I blamed the topography of my city whole the month June, but it becomes a shield this time.
Now I wish any typhoon come to my country with only little damage.
P.S. I tried to correct some of your mistakes as marked :)
0
The heavy rain in South Korea
The Climate of South Korea is being weird.Usually, June and July is rainy season and most amount of rain falls at these months.
This year, the period of rain fall is extraordinarily short and heavy.
Some cities in Korea ware flooded even though there was a fine drainage.
It seems that hotter summer in Korea affected this strange rain fall.
People say that the worm Earth caused this phenomenon.
Fortunately, here is okay because my city is surrounded by mountains.
It also means that my city is hotter than other region because cool air from other region can't come to this city.
I blamed the topography of my city whole the month June, but it becomes a shield this time.
Now I wish any upcoming typhoon come to my country with would cause only little damage to my country.
>>Hi Yeol, I just edited your last sentence. :)
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
