An ordinary day
In an ordinary day, James wakes up at 8 pm, has breakfast, wash himself and gets ready to work.
He gets in at 9pm, checks for emails and catches up with his colleagues.
There are two breaks of 10minutes eachone, one at 11pm and another at 4pm
When he gets off, then he usually goes to the gym till 8pm, so gets in at 8.30 and has dinner.
He's usually a night owl so he doens't go to bed till 1pm.
by the way
James works as an insurance broken
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An ordinary day
On an ordinary day, James wakes up at 8am, has breakfast, washes himself and gets ready to for work.He gets in arrives at work at 9am ("gets in" is ok, but a little better to be more explicit), checks for emails and catches up with his colleagues.
There are two breaks of 10 minutes each, one at 11am and another at 4pm.
When he gets off, then he usually goes to the gym till 8pm, and then gets home at 8.30pm and has dinner.
He's usually a night owl, so he doesn't go to bed till 1am.
By the way, James works as an insurance broken broker.
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An ordinary day
On an ordinary day, James wakes up at 8 a.m., has breakfast, washes himself and gets ready for to work.He gets in at 9a.m., checks for emails and catches up with his colleagues.
There are two breaks of 10 minutes eachone, one at 11a.m. and another at 4p.m.
When he gets off, then he usually goes to the gym till 8p.m., so gets in at 8.30 and has dinner.
He's usually a night owl so he doensn't go to bed till 1a.m.
By the way, James works as an insurance broker.
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An ordinary day
In On an ordinary day, James wakes up at 8 pm am, has breakfast, washes andgets ready to for work.He gets in at 9 am, checks for his emails and catches up with his colleagues.
There are two breaks of 10minutes each one -, one at 11 am and another at 4 pm
When he gets off, then he usually goes to the gym till 8 pm, so gets in at 8.30 and has dinner.
He's usually a night owl (Night owl is a personality trait, not a behaviour. Therefore it isn't necessarily correct to say he is usually a night owl. You can say he is a night owl, so it is common for him to go to bed late) so he doesn't go to bed till 1 am.
By the way
James works as an insurance broker
Sounds like an ordinary day for lots of office workers :D
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An ordinary day
In an ordinary day, James wakes up at 8 am, has breakfast, showers and gets ready for work. He gets in at 9am, checks his emails and catches up with his colleagues.There are two 10 minute breaks at work: one at 11am and another at 4pm
When James gets off work, he usually goes to the gym until 8pm. He gets home around 8.30 and then has dinner.
James is usually a night owl so he doens't go to bed until 1am.
BTW, James works as an insurance broker
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