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Corrections are welcome, thanks a lot :) Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enquire about some doubts related to the Laboratory techniques summer course. The course is starting on July 3rd until the 31st, therefore, I will arrive the 1st of July and my departure will be one month later, the 1st of August. According to the course time table, most of the lessons will be in the morning and some practices in the lab will take place two days per week. According to this, I would like to ask you for a specific accommodation due to I think I will need to be focus in my work most of the time. I would really appreciate if you could allocate me a single apartment in a quite area of the campus, with balcony if possible. Also, because I am visiting a foreign country, I would be interested in some information about the campus connections with the city centre, the airport and the train station. Moreover, I am really keen to do some excursions to surrounded areas, so public transport is important for me as well. May you facilitate me some information in this regard? I would be very grateful for your efforts. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Miguel Angel Cuesta

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Corrections are welcome, thanks a lot :)

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire about some doubts related/with respect to the Laboratory techniques summer course.
The course is starting from July 3rd until to July 31st. Therefore, I will arrive on July 1st and my departure will be one month later, on August 1st. According to the course timetable, most of the lessons will be in the morning and some lab practices in the lab will take place two days per week. According to this As such, I would like to ask you  request for a specific available accommodation due to I think I will  As I need to be focused on my work most of the time, I would really appreciate if you could allocate me a single apartment in a quite quiet area of the campus, with a balcony if possible.
Also, because As I am visiting a foreign country, I would be interested in some information about the campus connections with to the city centre, the airport, and the train station. Moreover, I am really keen to do some excursions to surrounded areas, so public transport is important for me as well. May/can you facilitate me with some information in  with this regard/ on this? I would be very grateful for your efforts.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,
Miguel Angel Cuesta


Awesome write-up Miguel. Do take note that my corrections are style and simplicity related. In English or in most languages, less is more. Try to be more concise.

There are two ways to write dates, January 1st or 1st of January. Pick either one and be consistent about it. Don't mix the styles halfway. Keep it up!

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Hi Miguel! Here it goes :)

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire about some doubts ('details' may sound better) related to the Laboratory techniques summer course.
The course is starting on July 3rd and goes on until the 31st. I will arrive on 1st ofJuly and my departure will be one month later, the 1st of August. According to the course timetable, most of the lessons will be in the morning and some practices in the lab will take place two days a week. With this in mind, I would like to ask for a more specific  accommodation since I think I will need to be focused on my work most of the time. I would really appreciate if you could find a single apartment in a quiet area of the campus, with a balcony if possible.
Also, because I am visiting a foreign country, I would be interested in some information about the campus connections with the city centre, the airport and the train station. Moreover, I am really keen to do some excursions to surrounding areas so public transport is important for me as well. May you provide me with some information in this area? I would be very grateful for your efforts.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully, (Yours sincerely may be better)
Miguel Angel Cuesta

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