IELTS Writing Task 2 (only Introduction)
Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Please correct it.
In some developing nations rail transport play's vital role in the movement of people, so their government should expend more budget on railways compare to other travels. I strongly agree to spend more money in increasing demand of public transport and less other modes to minimize environment affect. (48 words)
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IELTS Writing Task 2 (only Introduction)
Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Please correct it.
In some developing nations rail transport plays vital role in the movement of people, so their governments should expend more of their budgets on railways compared to other forms of transport. I strongly agree with spending more money on the increasing demands of public transport and less on other modes of transport to minimize environment affect.
A better introduction would be....
Rail transport plays a vital role in the movement of people and goods, particularly in developing nations where roads can be slow and congested. Furthermore railways transport large numbers of people and large quantities of goods with less effect on the environment. For these reasons I strongly agree with government spending more money on the increasing demands of railways, and less on other modes of transport like roads.
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