Diary of one day ある日の日記
It's the rainy season now.But it was cloudy today.
And there was a light shower in the afternoon.
At that time, I was practicing to make a green tea for tea ceremony.
When I hard sounds of rain, I was surprised.
After the lesson, I went to eat beef curry-rice for lunch at cafe.
I got home with feeling my fatigue.
I made meals and ate.
And then, I watched TV drama and learned English.
I will learn English also tomorrow.
梅雨の季節です。
今日は曇りでしたが、午後、にわか雨がふりました。
その時、私は茶道のお点前のお稽古にきていました。
雨の音を聞いたとき、私は驚きました。
お稽古の後、私はお昼ご飯に喫茶店へビーフカレーを食べに行きました。
私は疲れを感じながら帰宅しました。
夕食を作り、食べました。
そして、テレビドラマを見たり、英語の勉強をしたりしました。
明日もまた、英語を頑張るぞ。
Please check them.
添削よろしくお願い致します。
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1) It's the rainy season now. But it was cloudy today. I don't think that it's necessary to use "but" here because if it's the rainy season people are already expecting the day to be cloudy.
2) When I hard heard sounds of rain, I was surprised.
3) I got home with feeling my fatigue fatigued/ exhausted/ tired/ wasted.
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