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I don't like life like this I have said my dream and tried to make it come true sooner.I was grateful when I got this job as soon as I graduated from university,but now,I feel regret.It has been for 1 year until 8th May,I don't find any meaning from the begining of this year. In Chinese market,textile is not strengh any longer,at least,I think so.Every price rises,it means our cost rises.More and more foreign orders leaves to other countries. My boss treats me well,I admit.However,she wants to expand her business range and doesn't have so much time to manage this company.She engages a manager.At begining,I think he's kind,but I don't think so now,I am so fool for that thought.He starts to push out me from this year,at the begining,I don't understand why he does so,now,I see,he wants this company to be his own,so he pushed out my customers and put all mistakes on me,even doesn't admit his decision.I feel he is contemptible，for his benefits. I feel so angry,not only for myself,also for my boss.She believes him so much,but what she gets from the manager.I don't tell her anything,because she doesn't believe.Oh,my god!!! I will be crazy.I am a frank girl,and I have my principle and always believe I must treat anyone who is kind to me well. I intend to resign in July.It has no meaning for me.In fact,I can abandon my order now,but I can't,not for any profit,just for my boss' kindness and my customer,if I done,my boss will lose this order and customer will have trouble when they find a new person taking place of me,and I will look down upon me. I must insist two month,after I follow this order,I will rest for a long time.So tired for this period of time.I believe I will find a great opportunity in future,not for other factors,just because there should be a space for a girl who is ready to face everything and insists something right,there should be a person to find a girl like this...

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I don't like a life like this

I have said my dream and tried to make it come true sooner. I have a dream and I tried to realize it sooner.  I was grateful when I got this job as soon as when I graduated from university.  But now, I feel am regretting.  It has been for will be a year until at this job when 8th May comes along.  I don't didn't find any meaning from job satisfaction from the begining of this year. 

The  Chinese textile market,textile is not strengh any longer is no longer strong.  At least that's what I think so.Every price of material rises,it means our cost also rises. More and more foreign orders leaves to are leaving for other cheaper labour countries.

I had to admit that my boss treats me well,I admit.However, she wants to expanding her business range and doesn't have so much enough time to manage this company. She engages hired someone to manager the company.  At In the beginning1, I think he's he was kind but I don't think so now anymore2.  I had been had. 3am so fool for that thought.  He starts to push out me from this year,at the begining,I don't understand why he does so,now,I see,he wants this company to be his own,so he pushed out my customers and put all mistakes on me,even doesn't admit his decision.I feel he is contemptible，for his benefits. Since the beginning of the year, I was slowly being marginalized.  At first I did not understand but now as I see it, he wanted to take control of the company and make it his own.  He took away my customers and clients; blame me for all every mistake that occurred; did not own up to his own errors.  He is a contemptible person.

I feel so angry,not only for myself,also for my boss.She believes him so much,but what she gets from the manager.I don't tell her anything,because she doesn't believe.Oh,my god!!! I will be crazy.I am a frank girl,and I have my principle and always believe I must treat anyone who is kind to me well.
I intend to resign in July.It has no meaning for me.In fact,I can abandon my order now,but I can't,not for any profit,just for my boss' kindness and my customer,if I done,my boss will lose this order and customer will have trouble when they find a new person taking place of me,and I will look down upon me.

I am angry not only at myself but at my boss too.  She trusts him very much.  I did not inform her of anything because she would not believe my words.  Oh my God!  I will turn crazy.  I am a frank person.  I have my principles and I believe that kindness from others must be reciprocated.  I have every intention to resign in July.  There is no more meaning in this place for me.  I cannot forsake my responsibility - not because there is a profit made but to the kindness that my boss and my customers had shown me.  If I abandoned them now, my boss will lose the order and my customers will have a hard time dealing with my replacement.  I abhore the notion that I am a person shirking from my responsibilities.

I must insist two month,after I follow this order,I will rest for a long time.So tired for this period of time.I believe I will find a great opportunity in future,not for other factors,just because there should be a space for a girl who is ready to face everything and insists something right,there should be a person to find a girl like this...

I shall insist on taking at least two months of rest after this last order has been fulfilled.  I am so tired.  I am confident that I will find a better prospect in the future.  I am a girl who is able to face anthing thing that is thrown at her path and not to compromise her principles.  I am sure somewhere out there, they are looking for someone like me.

1. Or you can say, "At first..."
2. Or "I have changed my mind..."
3.  meaning I had been fooled.  If you want to use your original words, you should say, "I was fooled by his ... " and include explanation of how you had been fooled.  For example, "I was fooled by his charms."

Great piece of work.  However I with these corrections, you will learn how to express yourself better in English.  Your problem: need to be aware of punctuation and especially space indentation  after the punctuation marks and leave a blank line after every paragraph.  It takes time but you are heading in the right direction.  Your vocabulary isn't bad.  Not many learners of English know the meaning of contemptible.

Aside from grammar etc... If I were you, I would have a nice chat with your boss just before you leave and explain to the reason of your resignation.  Have a heart to heart talk with and discuss the problems you had faced.  She will be inclined to believe you since you are leaving the company.  If your boss had treated you kindly, repay that kindness not by just finishing the last order so that she won't lose that profit.  That's peanuts compared to the bigger picture.  Tell her of the greater danger lurking; that this manager of hers is out for the kill - to wrestle control of the company for himself.  If she does not believe your words, at least tell her to be alert and observe carefully what's happening before it's too late.

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