About today.
I'm a 19 year old girl with a mind of 15. A girl who dreams but stays true. Passionate about life, air, nature, people and animals. That seeks to learn every day. This is me.
I'm learning english, And I wonder if my text is too bad. Help me please.
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About today
I'm a 19 nineteen-year- old girl with a the mind of 15 a fifteen-year-old, a girl who dreams but stays true. I'm passionate about life, air, nature, people, and animals. That who seeks to learn every day. This is me.
Hi, Larissa! Your text is not bad at all. Your mistakes are mostly in writing style, but that's something you'll get more used to as you learn to write more in English. Keep up the good work! =)
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About today.
I'm a 19-year-old girl with a mind of a 15 fifteen-year-old. A girl who dreams but stays true. Passionate about life, air, nature, people, and animals. Someone who seeks to learn every day. This is me.I'm learning English, And I'm wondering if my text is too bad. Help me please.
Nice job! Continue writing!
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