First lesson on Italki

At first Steve didn't know how deep I mastered English, so he kindly started lesson in a elementary level. (Steve didn't know my English level at first, so he started the lesson as if I were a beginner. Note: Time phrases like "this morning and at first go at the end of the sentence. If you put them at the beginning of the sentence, you must use a comma after the time phrase.)

Then after 10mins he has found that he can explain me the syllables of one word in an interesting method. (Ten minutes into the lesson, he realized that he did not need to use simple English words to explain English concepts to me. Note: I'm just guessing that this is what you mean because your original sentence does not make sense.)

I really appreciate it!

And at the end of lesson, he gave me some advice to use English daily. (Furthermore, at the end of the lesson, Steve told me to use English every day as much as possible./He advised me to use English every day.. Note: Do not use "and" to start a sentence. Use furthermore or moreover.)

That's also his experience when he was studying Japanese. (That was his experience learning Japanese.)

It was very interesting. (Note: You don't need this sentence. Get rid of it.)

Through this lesson I can understand which aspect I need to improve, and how to memorize the vocabulary in use method. That's my today's wonderful experience although there always are things make me distracted (such as things around kids), but this experience was my source of joy. (That was my first experience learning English from a native speaker. Even though, my kids did distract me during the lesson, I still felt a sense of accomplishment. Note: You have more than one sentence that you are trying to connect. Instead, you should make two sentences.)

(Thank you for reading and please kindly correct! I appreciate it~~) (Thank you for reading this. I appreciate any feedback anyone has to offer.)

First lesson on Italki