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Could someone check my writing? With stunning beaches, emerald water, and exotic trees, the Philippines is true tropical paradise. I was so excited to visit the country, but I was worried that I can't understand their language and encounter a language barrier. However, my concern was erased since everyone I met talked to me in English and which was much more fluent than I’d expected. I met plenty of people when I took a taxi, went to malls, supermarkets and wandering off to a cafe. I found everyone is fluent in English from young shop staff to taxi drivers who looked like around sixties. They usually spoke a local language, but they quickly changed the language and talked to me in English once they glanced at me. I was amazed how good they are at English and how developed the English prevalence is in the Philippines. When I went to a theater to watch Inside Out from Disney, there were many kids. Although it was English without subtitles, they seemed to understand perfectly what the characters were saying and they were laughing a lot, which amazed me. There was a slight disappointment in my heart when I was only being quiet while everyone was laughing though. ....→②

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Could someone check my writing?

With stunning beaches, emerald water, and exotic trees, the Philippines is a true tropical paradise. I was so excited to visit the country, but I was worried that I couldn't understand their language and would encounter a language barrier. However, my concern was erased since everyone I met talked to me in English and and I  was much more fluent than I’d expected.

I met plenty of people when I took a taxi, went to malls, supermarkets and wandered off to a cafe. I found that everyone is fluent in English from young shop staff to taxi drivers who looked like around sixty. They usually spoke a local language, but they quickly changed language and talked to me in English once they glanced at me. I was amazed how good they are at English and how developed the English prevalence is in the Philippines. When I went to a theater to watch Inside Out by Disney, there were many kids. Although it was English without subtitles, they seemed to understand perfectly what the characters were saying and they were laughing a lot, which amazed me. There was a slight disappointment in my heart when I was the only one being quiet while everyone was laughing though.

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Nice work Miwa, just a few small corrections.


Bob

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