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IELTS: Smoking Kills IELTS Writing Sample Smoking Kills It has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? The smoke is a bad habit. That activity can harm man health. To make a conclusion we need to reveal both sides of the quarrel, therefore let’s try to deliberate how the cigarettes affect our life. In my opinion there is only one positive effect of smoking, it is communication with another person, who is addicted to cigarettes also. Sometimes my colleagues have a rest time together, because they need to come out an office building to smoke. On the other hand there are a lot of negative statements about smoking. That activity demands money spending, time wasting and of course health deteriorating. As you know the passive smoking can spoilt the health, but I think the worst issue what cigarettes can bring to our world is the nasty smell. It is outrageous when somebody allow to himself to make the surround air worse. Innocent persons suffer of that. For this reason authorities try to protect people against that silent attack by means of smoke permissions in all public places. In fact the smoking is almost deprived. I absolutely agree with statements that smoking should be illegal throughout the world. People can copy bad behavior, hence it is needed to show only good conduct anywhere. The smoking should not irritate former smoke person to have a cigarette again. Moreover young generation in my opinion must not see how the old persons do inappropriate things.

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I'm amazed at how many young people smoke in America. I can't say it should be illegal, but maybe some of the ingredients put into cigarettes like nicotine should be. But its strange that so many people still smoke even knowing it causes cancer. I think it is a testament to the state of things in the world.
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IELTS: Smoking Kills

IELTS Writing Sample
Smoking Kills
It has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The smoke Smoking is a bad habit. That activity can harm man health. To make a conclusion we need to reveal both sides of the quarrel discussion, therefore let’s try to deliberate(?) how the cigarettes affect our life.

In my opinion, there is the only one positive effect of smoking it is a communication with another person, who is addicted to cigarettes too also. Sometimes my colleagues have a rest time together, because they need to come out an office building to smoke.

On the other hand, there are a lot of negative statements about smoking. That activity demands money spending, time wasting and of course, health deterioration deteriorating. As you know Even the passive smoking can spoilt spoil the health, but I think the worst issue what cigarettes can bring to our world is the nasty smell. It is outrageous when somebody person allows to himself to make the surrounding air worse. Innocent persons people suffer from of that. For this reason, authorities try to protect people against that silent attack by means of smoke permissions in all public places. In fact, the smoking is almost deprived.

I absolutely agree with the statements that smoking should be illegal throughout the world. People can copy bad behavior, hence it is needed to show only good conduct anywhere. The smoking should not irritate former smoke people person to have a cigarette again. Moreover, a young generation, in my opinion, must not see how elderly people the old persons do inappropriate things.
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IELTS: Smoking Kills

IELTS Writing Sample
Smoking Kills
It has been proven that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The   Smoking is a bad habit. That activity can harm man health. To make a conclusion we need to reveal both sides of the quarrel, therefore let’s try to deliberate how the cigarettes affect our life.

In my opinion there is only one positive effect of smoking, it is communication with another person, who is addicted to cigarettes also. Sometimes my colleagues have a rest time together, because they need to come out an office building to smoke.

On the other hand there are a lot of negative statements about smoking. That activity demands money spending, time wasting and of course health deteriorating. As you know the passive smoking can spoilt the health, but I think the worst issue what cigarettes can bring to our world is the nasty smell. It is outrageous when somebody allow to himself to make the surround air worse. Innocent persons suffer of that. For this reason authorities try to protect people against that silent attack by means of smoke permissions in all public places. In fact the smoking is almost deprived.

I absolutely agree with statements that smoking should be illegal throughout the world. People can copy bad behavior, hence it is needed to show only good conduct anywhere. The smoking should not irritate former smoke person to have a cigarette again. Moreover young generation in my opinion must not see how the old persons do inappropriate things.

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