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A fun beggar My name is Percy Buttons, a beggar, but a fun beggar.I live in Bridge Street. Though I have no money, no job, I can stand on my head, and I got many meals and beers through it. Everyone knows me, I calls at everyone's house in the street once a month and always ask for a meal and a glasses beer. In return for this, I'll stand on my head and sing songs. Recently a new family moved here,I visited it at once ,and ask for a meal and a glasses of beer,and sang a song. The hostess is a generous lady and very beautiful.After I left, she gave me a piece of cheese and a lovely smile.

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A fun beggar

My name is Percy Buttons, a beggar, but a fun beggar. I live in Bridge Street. Though I have no money and no job, I can stand on my head, and I have received many meals and beers through it. Everyone knows me. I call at everyone's house in the street once a month and always ask for a meal and a glass of beer. In return for this, I'll stand on my head and sing songs. Recently, a new family moved here. I visited them once, sang a song, and asked for a meal and a glass of beer. (I changed the order here, because it makes more sense to ask for the beer and meal after singing the song). The hostess was a generous lady and very beautiful. After I had finished, she gave me a piece of cheese and a lovely smile (It doesn't really make sense that she gave you a piece of cheese after you left).
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A fun beggar

My name is Percy Buttons. I am a beggar, but a fun beggar. I live in on Bridge Street.

Though I have no money and no job, I have this talent in which I can stand on my head, and I've gotten many meals and beers through it.
Everyone knows me. I calls at visit everyone's house in the on this street once a month and always ask for a meal and a glasses of beer.
In return for this, I'll stand on my head and sing songs.
Recently, a new family moved here. I visited it them at once and asked for a meal and a glasses of beer and then sang a song. The hostess is a generous lady and very beautiful. After I left, she gave me a piece of cheese and a lovely smile.

Very interesting and entertaining story, Sam! I enjoyed reading it a lot =)

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My name is Percy Buttons, a beggar, but a FUN beggar X> My name is Percy Buttons, a beggar, and a funny one at that. Hostess ? You were never invited to be her guest . The lady of the house is a generous lady ( the female head of the family. I got many meals and beers through it. X > by doing that / by performing my head-on- my- head act . By something > A means of achieving something / through something > indicating a process you have to go through first ( often indicating some difficulty )> He won through trickery/ I succeeded through my own effort.

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