Younger Hi Recently my friend and I went to see a new film (I'm sixteen and she is seventeen.) We said the film that we wanted to go, but the seller said that I didn't look sixteen and cannot sell m

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Oksana

Younger Hi Recently my friend and I went to see a new film (I'm sixteen and she is seventeen.) We said the film that we wanted to go, but the seller said that I didn't look sixteen and cannot sell me a ticket.It was so embarrassing! I didn't have ID and I just didn't know what to do. But my friend said "Let's go to the other checkout" and we bought us tickets there. I don't know what it was, but it was nice and at the same time "What? I'm not twelve!" Just hope you will help me correct the errors

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Younger

Hi

Recently my friend and I went to the cinema to see a new film (I'm sixteen and she is seventeen.)
We told the seller the film that we wanted to see, but the seller said that I don't look sixteen and cannot sell me a ticket. It was so embarrassing! I didn't have any identification document ID and I just didn't know what to do, but my friend said "Let's go to the other checkout" and bought our tickets there. I don't know what it was, but it was nice and at the same time "What? I'm not twelve!" (not sure what this sentence means, perhaps rewrite it a different way? Do you mean that it was flattering that the seller thought you were younger?)

I hope you will help me correct the errors.

Younger

Hi

Recently my friend and I went to the cinema to see a new film (I'm sixteen and she is seventeen).
We said the film that we wanted to see, but the seller said that I didn't look sixteen and that they could not sell me a ticket. It was so embarrassing! I didn't have identification documents and I just didn't know what to do. But my friend said "Let's go to the other checkout." and we bought tickets there. I don't know what it was, but it was nice and at the same time "What? I'm not twelve!"

I just hope you will help me correct the errors.

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