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5:30 AM I’m a morning person. I get up early while my family remains nestled in their warm comfy beds. This doesn't mean they are sleepyheads. Or lazybones. It’s just that I’m a particularly early riser. For it is only at this time that the house is quiet and still. Just the way I like it. The truth is, it wasn’t all that difficult for me to get up that early in the morning. That's part of me.

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5:30 AM

I’m a morning person. I get up early while my family remains nestled in their warm, (<--Insert a comma between two consecutive adjectives.) comfy beds. This doesn't mean they are sleepyheads or lazybones; it’s just that I’m a particularly early riser. For it is only at this time that the house is quiet and still, just the way I like it.

The truth is, it wasn’t all that difficult for me to get up that early in the morning. That's just a part of me.

Excellent writing, Addy! You seem to be very comfortable with English. Keep up the good work! =)

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5:30 AM

I’m a morning person. I get up early while my family remains nestled in their warm comfy beds. This doesn't mean they are sleepyheads or lazybones. It’s just that I’m a particularly early riser. For me,  it is only at this time in which the house is quiet and still. Just the way I like it.
The truth is, it isn't all that difficult for me to get up that early in the morning. It's a part of me.
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5:30 AM

I’m a morning person. I get up early while my family remains nestled in their warm comfy beds. This doesn't mean they are sleepyheads. Or lazybones. It’s just that I’m a particularly early riser. For it is only at this time that the house is quiet and still, just the way I like it.
The truth is, it wasn’t all that difficult for me to get up that early in the morning. That's part of who I am.
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Great work Addy, I enjoyed your use of the word nestled and sleepyheads. The most important correction i see is: "The truth is, its not difficult at all for me to get up that early in the morning. That's a part of who I am."

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