First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,everyone! I am a college student studying in China now! I am very interested in English and its culture.
I hope to make friends here and I also can teach you Chinese Madrian. What's more,we can chat with each other and talk about something else such as our traditional culture and the movies or songs.
Glad to meet you here!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,everyone! I am a college student studying in ChinaI hope to make friends here.
Glad to meet you here!
1. Redundant. "Studying" is a continuous tense and you are using present the present form.
2. The conjunction, "and" is just to join two related concepts. Making friends and teaching are two different things. You can use the phrase, "At the same time I can teach you..." Still it should be in two sentences for good writing.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, everyone! I am a college student studying in China now! I am very interested in English and its culture.I hope to make friends here and I also can teach you Chinese Madrian. What's more, we can chat with each other and talk about something else such as our traditional culture and the movies or songs.
Glad to meet you here!
(The only mistakes I saw and corrected were spacing issues.)
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