A short story (PLEASE CORRECT IT)
Hello everybody,
Two days ago a dear friend of mine told me about his sentimental situation and I am still shocked about his confidences. In particular he revelead me he had seen his girlfriend while she was cheating on him. I suggested him to dump her and he agreed with me. He is really upset because he is still in love with her. In these days I am trying to explain to him that this kind of situations are usual and everyone once in their lifes at least have suffered them (I do not think this sentence is correct).
In these days I will try to be close to him and I will make him feel confortable.
I have just made this story up to use different verb tenses but I am not really sure about the correctness of some sentences, I would be glad if someone will help me :D
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A Short Story (Please Correct It)
Hello everybody,
I have made up the following short story, to use different verb tenses, but I am not really sure about the correctness of some sentences, I would be happy if someone would help me. :D
Two days ago, a close friend of mine, told me about a situation he is dealing with, and I am still shocked by what he told me. In particular, he revealed to me, that he had seen his girlfriend while she was cheating on him. I suggested to him, to dump her and he agreed with me. He is really upset, because he is still in love with her. These past few days, I have tried to explain to him, that this kind of situation happens, and that everyone, at least once in their lives, has had to deal with this type of situation. These next few days, I will try to be close to him, and do my best to make him feel better.
Not bad Giovanni, an interesting story! It would be better to put the part about the story being made up at the beginning, so people know right away, that this story is not real. I noticed a few problems with word choice and placement. I also noticed problems with commas, and incorrect tense in some sentences. If you have any questions, please let me know!
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A short story (PLEASE CORRECT IT)
Hello everybody,Two days ago a dear friend of mine told me about his sentimental situation and I am still shocked about his confidences. In particular he revealed to me that he saw his girlfriend while she was cheating on him. I suggested to dump her and he agreed with me. He is really upset because he is still in love with her. These days I am trying to explain to him that this kind of situation is common and everyone has gone through it at least once in their life. (I do not think this sentence is correct).
In these days I will try to be close to him and I will make him feel comfortable.
I have just made this story up to use different verb tenses but I am not really sure about the correctness of some sentences, I would be glad if someone will help me :D
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