The event of the day
Today, I went shopping with my friend.
My friend is soooooo funny girl and She always makes me laugh.
I do love such her♡
If it's possible, I want everyone to meet my friend.
Then, going back to the event of the day, I spent 20,000 yen in a day！
When I came home and checked my wallet, I noticed I spent a lot of money.But I didn't regret because I had a great time.
For the last week, I was so busy, so I got refrehed.
Thank you for reading.
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The event of the day
Today, I went shopping with my friend.My friend is soooooo funny. girl and She always makes me laugh.
I do love her♡
If it's possible, I want everyone to meet my friend.
Then, Going back to the event of the day, I spent 20,000 yen in a day！one go!
When I came home and checked my wallet, I noticed I'd spent a lot of money. But, I didn't regret it because I had a great time.
For the Last week, I was so busy, so I felt got refreshed.
Thank you for reading.
If you find any mistakes in this text, please let me know.
Using sooooooooooooooo is not technically correct - however, it is often used in casual writing (text messages & emails) to friends or family as an emphasis. As long as you don't use it in your college work it is fine :-)
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The events of the day
Today, I went shopping with my friend.
I do love such her so much ♡
If it's possible, I want everyone to meet my friend.
Then, going back to the event of the day, I spent 20,000 yen in a day!
When I came home and checked my wallet, I noticed I spent a lot of money, but I didn't regret because I had a great time.
For the last week, I was so busy, so I got felt refreshed.
Thank you for reading.
If you find any mistakes in this text, please let me know.
I hope you bought something worthwhile with that 20,000 yen, Kumi =)
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