Generally talking about my future plans, please CORRECT :D
Have you ever been in that point of your life where you do not know what to do in near future? Well I am right there. It sounds ridiculous because until some months ago I had lots of plans and projects about my future and my job, everything was so clear on my mind. Lately though, it seems I lose my way. I will graduate next March but I can not imagine my life behind a desk in a depressing office anymore. It might sound childish but I really would love living in a beach with my toes in sands every day with the people I love. I will never be tired of the sea's waves sound. Some days ago I read Robinson Crusoe and I imagined my life in a desert island and thought that it surely would be better than work in an office and be stressed for every day of my life.
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Generally talking about my future plans, please CORRECT :D
Have you ever been at that point in your life where you do not know what you want to do in the near future? Well I am there right now. It sounds ridiculous because up until a few months ago, I had lots of plans and projects for my future and my job. Everything was so clear in my mind. Lately though, it seems that I have lost my way. I will graduate next March but I can not imagine my life behind a desk in a depressing office. It might sound childish but I really would love to live on a beach with my toes in the sand every day, surrounded by the people who I love. I will never get tired of the sound of the waves. A few days ago, I read Robinson Crusoe and I imagined my life on a desert island and thought that it surely would be better than working in an office and being stressed out every day of my life.0
Talking About My Future Plans, Please Correct :D
Have you ever been a that point in your life where you do not know what to do in the near future? Well, I'm at that point in my life. It sounds ridiculous, because until recently, I had lots of plans about my future and my job, everything was so clear in my mind. Lately though, it seems like I have lost my way. I will graduate next March, but I cannot imagine my life behind a desk in a depressing office. It might sound childish, but I would really love to live on a beach with my toes in the sand every day, with the people I love. I would never get tired of the sound of the waves. Several days ago, I read Robinson Crusoe, and I imagined my life on a desert island, and thought that is surely would be better than working in an office, and having to deal with stress every day of my life.
Giovanni, this was very nicely written, great job my friend! :) There were a few minor mistakes with verb tense and endings, as well as a few mistakes with preposition choice, but overall not bad! If you have any questions, please let me know!
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