Talking About My Family

My family is really the cornerstone of my entire life, and I really love spending time with them. There are just four people in my family, I have a younger brother that is attending school to become a chef. I really appreciate the way my mom encourages my brother and I to follow our dreams and never give up. My dad is like a super hero to me. He is a hardworking person, and can always solve our problems. Another good trait, is that he's cool headed, even during an emergency; he can always find the best solution, and he never panics.

I don't live in my hometown anymore, but every time I go back, I enjoy spending time with my family. Even though I don't live with them anymore, I am very close to my parents and I call them every day. I am very close with my grandparents as well. In fact, when I am in town, I usually go to their house every Sunday, and have lunch with them, along with my uncles, aunts, and cousins. My grandfather is one of the people I admire the most. Every time I hear him speak, I find it interesting. I have a special bond with my cousin as well. I find him really funny, and in some ways, he is the opposite of me, in fact he really likes practicing lots of different sports, though his favorite is defiantly football.

Overall Giovanni, I thought you wrote this well! There were a few mistakes I corrected, such as grammar, word choice and placement, and spelling. If you have any questions, please let me know! If you would like help to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you!