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To day is special day with myself. I had a relationship through three years with my girl friend. She is a wonderful girl. How I don't know discribe about her. She always inside me when the most I tired. We were nice memories and can't remembered. Sometime I wonder that: why can I meet a wonderful girl like her? I lucky or I dreaming? and so much things like it. I don't know . At the moment, I just know that I love her so much. I thought that is a girl my life. I don't know can I take her inside me forever ? But I will try to be able become the better man. I never left her unless her said her don't need me.
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Can anyone help me correct this note book . Thanks for your help
Today is a special day for myself. I have had a three-year relationship with my girlfriend. She is a wonderful girl. I don't know how to describe her. She is always on my mind when I am most tired. We have nice memories together and I can't remember them all. Sometimes, I wonder, why I have met such a wonderful girl like her? Am I lucky or am I dreaming? And so many things like it. I don't know. At the moment, I just know that I love her so much. I think that is the girl of my life. I don't know if I can make her part of my life forever? But I will try to be able a better man. I will never leave her unless she says that she doesn't need me anymore.Well done Nguyen! Not an easy passage to write but you expressed your thoughts well. And yes, I hope the best for you and your girlfriend too!
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Today is special day with myself for me. I have now had been in a relationship through for three years with my girlfriend. She is a wonderful girl. How I don't know how to describe about her. She is always inside beside me when I am the most I tired. We were have such nice memories and that can't remembered be forgotten. Sometimes, I wonder that: why can how could I meet a wonderful girl like her? Am I lucky, or am I dreaming? and so much things like it. I don't know. At the this moment, I just know that I love her so much. I thought think that she is a the girl of my life. I don't know if can I take have her inside remain beside me forever, but I will try to be able become the a better man. I will never left leave her unless her said her don't she says she doesn't need me anymore.
Congratulations on three years together with your girlfriend, Nguyễn! Please feel free to ask me any questions you may have about my corrections =)
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