Paper Towns #001

So... I need to improve my English, that's why I decided to read my first book in English!
I choose the book Paper Towns by John Green. I choose this book because it has a (teenager) colloquial language and the story (history is about historical facts, a story is something like a tale) is about normal people living normal lives. I am going to describe my experience reading that book here on italki. This is the first post about the book!

#001 - Prologue
Paper Towns starts with Quentin talking about Margo. Quentin is a boy and he is in love with Margo. Quentin tells to us that everyone gets a miracle and living next door to Margo is his miracle. So, Quentin is crazy in love with Margo since they were kids. One day, when they were nine, they played in the park and found a dead guy. Quentin was afraid and took two steps to backwards, but Margo took two steps forward. They went back to home, but Margo investigated about the dead guy/wanted to find out more about the dead guy and found much information (information is uncountable, so: much. use many for countable nouns) about him. Then, Quentin concluded that Margo always loved mysteries and she loves mysteries so much that she became one.(better: Quentin concluded that Margo loved mysteries so much she became one)

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Very good! Try to be a little bit more attentive with countable/ uncountable nouns and plural forms. Your writing is very fluent and easy-going. Continue this way!:)