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Life is imperfection “What is your dream?” There’s someone asked me. I was very ashamed. I don’t know what my dream is. At first, whether it can be realizable, if not, there are a lot of dreams I have. For example: Do a speech at TED, and receive the applause. To be a woman who is valuable and respected. I think that’s not unprocurable, but how can I do. I always fall into the dilemma that I set up by myself. I looked down upon others, then looked back, I have a lot of defects too. I am a half-hearted person, I never do anything for my dreams. I never worked hard for it. Oh, pessimism again. But I don’t want to live with this thought. I must be optimistic, but without blindly. I need to set up a little target, to achieve a big target. Even if I can’t successful at the last. I will learn a lot in the process also. That’s the harvest. Life is imperfect. You can find the way to improve yourself in the imperfection.

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Life is not perfect (imperfection 是名词)

“What is your dream?” There’s , someone asked me. I was very ashamed. I don’t know what my dream was (注意时态). Whether or not they can be realized, I have a lot of dreams (语法顺序这样子说比较流畅) At first, whether it can be realizable, if not, there are a lot of dreams I have. For example: Do a speech at TED, and receive an the applause. To be a woman who is valuable valued and respected (保持时态一致). I think that’s not unprocurable, but how can I do (这里不懂你的意思). I always fall into the a dilemma that I set up by myself (后面这部分有一点多余). I looked look (刚刚"fall"是现在的时态,不要又改来改去) down upon others, then looked back look at myself and realize that I have a lot of defects too. I am a half-hearted (half-hearted 是副词所以只能形容动作,不能形容人) not always a motivated person as I never do anything for my dreams. I never worked work hard for it. Oh, I am being pessimistic pessimism again. But I don’t want to live with these thoughts this thought. I must be optimistic, but without not blindly optimistic . I need to set up a little small targets and slowly work my way (连贯小目标变成大目标的流程) to achieve a big target. Even if I can’t succeed in the end successful at the last ("at last" 是终于的意思。你这里是“最后”的意思), I will learn a lot in the process also. That’s the harvest (我知道你这里是“收获的意思但是英语不会这样子说,包括你前面已经说过成有学习。这句话就多余了帮你删掉). Life is imperfect. You can find the a way to improve yourself in the imperfection.
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"procure" is used for goods usually. "I've managed to procure a rare spice."
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Life is imperfection

“What is your dream?” someone asked me. I was very ashamed. I don’t know what my dream is. whether it can be realizable. There are a lot of dreams I have. For example: Do a speech at TED, and receive the applause. To be a woman who is valued and respected. I think that’s not unattainable, but how can I do it. I always fall into the dilemma that I set up by myself. I looked down upon others, then looked back and realised I have a lot of defects too. I am a half-hearted person, I never do anything for my dreams. I never worked hard for it. Oh, pessimism again. But I don’t want to live with this thought. I must be optimistic, but not blindly. I need to set up a little target, to achieve a big target. Even if I can’t be successful in the end. I will learn a lot in the process also. That’s the harvest. Life is imperfect. You can find the way to improve yourself in the imperfection.

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