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Tenses and ...my shy I really want to learn, to improve my english. I've studying the verb tenses. I think the english grammar is difficult! I have some greats friends whom help me a lot, they are kind! I want more time studying , I think the time is going so fast! It scares me!!! Suddenly already is today I've been thinking about my job, and about a lot of things ....Today early I was upset, and my boss ...oh gosh! .....I feel me crazy... He annoys me!! Later I remember that I need my job..I thank God! I hope God can forgive me when I feel sad or feel ungry! At night I was happy because my son was very happy :) Please, feel free to correct me! Thanks! :)

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Tenses and...my shyness

I really want to learn, to improve my English. I've been studying the verb tenses. I think the English grammar is difficult!

I have some greats friends whom help me a lot. They are kind! I want more time for studying; I think the time is going by so fast quickly! (<--"Quickly" is an adverb, while "fast" is an adjective.) It scares me!!! Suddenly it is already is today

I've been thinking about my job, and about a lot of other things. Earlier today, early I was upset, and my boss...oh gosh...I feel me crazy! He annoys me!! Later, I remembered that I need my job...I thank God! I hope God can forgive me when I feel sad or angry!
At night, I was happy because my son was very happy :)

Please, feel free to correct me! Thanks! :)

Here you go, Alexandra. I hope my corrections are helpful. Please let me know if you have any questions =)

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Tenses and ...my shy

I really want to learn, to improve my English. I've been studying the verb tenses. I think  English grammar is difficult!
I have some greats friends who help me a lot, they are kind! I want more time studying, I think the time is going so fast! It scares me!!! Suddenly already it's today

I've been thinking about my job, and about a lot of things. Earlier today  I was upset, and my boss ...oh gosh! .....I feel me crazy... He annoys me!! Later I remembered that I need my job. Thank God! I hope God can forgive me when I feel sad or angry!
Last night I was happy because my son was very happy :)

Please, feel free to correct me! Thanks! :)


Ifeel me crazy.<--This is o.k for this essay but formally you should say "I feel I'm crazy"

no need to say THE ENGLISH when referring to (the) English language UNLESS you specifically want to but you would not say THE ENGLIS GRAMMAR.

"I think English is difficult" <-- Is good.

'I think the English language is difficult"<-- you can say this 

'I think THE English Grammar is difficult" <-- the not needed 


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Tenses and ...my shy

I really want to learn, to improve my english. I've BEEN studying the verb tenses. I think the english grammar is difficult!
I have some great friends whom help me a lot, they are kind! I want more studying time  , I think the time is going by so fast! It scares me!!! Suddenly it’s already  today.

I've been thinking about my job, and about a lot of things ....earlier Today early I was upset, and my boss ...oh gosh! .....I feel me crazy... He annoys me!! Later I remembered   that I needed my job..I thank God! I hope God can forgive me when I feel sad or feel angry!
At night I was happy because my son was very happy :)

Please, feel free to correct me! Thanks! :)

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