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Nowadays more people have the opportunity to study in another country, in a foreign school or college for a year, for example, making a ¨Erasmus¨ year. It´s has many benefits for who decides to do it.
Firstly, they can improve their languages skills easier than in their countries. The reason is because of they must speaking all the time and wherever they gone; at supermarket, at university, at sightseeing tours…
Secondly, and at the same time all these young people will become in adventurous. This experiences results in growing up themselves. Spending a year outside your home can produce some personals benefit; for example, opening their minds to other different cultures and different lives styles.
Finally, study in a foreign school for a year will get them out of the comfortable zone as well as it can be the best way to find out parts of the world.
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Nowadays more people have the opportunity to study in another country, in a foreign school or college for a year. For example, making a ¨Erasmus¨ year. It´s has many benefits for those who decides to do it.Firstly, they can improve their languages skills easier than in their country (People only belong to one country so you wouldn't use "Countries" ) ies. The reason is because of they must speaking all the time and wherever they gone; at the supermarket, at university, at during sightseeing tours…
Secondly, and at the same time, all these young people will become in adventurous. This experiences results in growing up themselves. Spending a year outside your home can produce some personals benefits, for example, opening their minds to other different cultures and different lives styles.
Finally, studying in a foreign school for a year will get them out of their comfortable zone as well as it can being the best way to find out discover parts of the world.
Well done for this writing :) This is pretty good overall although there are places that need some work
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Nowadays more people have the opportunity to study in another country, in a foreign school or a college for a year, for example, making an ¨Erasmus¨ year. It´s has many benefits for those who decide decides to do it.Firstly, they can improve their languages language skills easier than in their countries. The reason is because of they must speak speaking all the time and wherever they have / they've gone; at a supermarket, at a university or at a sightseeing tours…
Secondly, and at the same time, all these young people will become in adventurous. This These experiences have helped them to grow in a mature manner. results in growing up themselves. Spending a year outside your home can produce some personals benefits; for example, opening their minds to other different cultures and different lives styles.
Finally, study in a foreign school for a year will get them out of the comfortable zone as well as it can be the best way to find out parts of the world.
Tu escritura fue muy bien. ¡Sigue avanzando!
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Nowadays more and more people have the opportunity to study in another country, in a foreign school or a college for a year, for example, making an ¨Erasmus¨ year. It has many benefits for for those who decide to do it. Firstly, they can improve their languages skills easier than in their countries. The reason is because of they must speak in the language of the country wherever they go to a supermarket, in university, at sightseeing tours. Secondly, at the same time, all these young people will become adventurous. These experiences help them to develop their personality. Spending a year away from your home can produce some personals benefit; for example, opening their minds to other different cultures and different lifestyles.Finally, study in a foreign school for a year will get them out of the comfort zone as well as it can be the best way to find out the different parts of the world.
Very well written!
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Nowadays more people have the opportunity to study in another country, in a foreign school or college for a year, for example, making a ¨Erasmus¨ year. It´s has many benefits for who decides to do it.Firstly, they can improve their languages skills easier than in their countries. The reason is because they must speak all the time and wherever they gone to supermarket, to university, to sightseeing tours…
Secondly, and at the same time all these young people will become in adventurous. These experiences result in growing up themselves. Spending a year outside your home can produce some personal benefits; for example, opening their minds to other different cultures and different lives styles.
Finally, study in a foreign school for a year will get them out of the comfortable zone as well as it can be the best way to find out parts of the world.
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