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ESSAY TO CORRECT: Everyone has the right to decide when and how to die? Nowadays, euthanasia is a much dicussed topic. I strongly belive that euthanasia must be legal because our body is the only thing that really belong to us therefore we should decide for its destinity. Unfortunately, sometimes our lifes became very difficult, cruel and painful for example if we suffer an accident or a fire. We can't imagine how tragic it would be if we can't walk, move, talk well, to be dependent forever. In these cases, I think that we aren't losing a life with euthanasia because a big part of his person died in the accident. What's more it would be a little selfish not to let a person get out of the pain. If a healthy person can comite suicide and we don't provide the means for, for example, quadriplegics to do it, victims would be limited again. In conclusion, euthanasia wouldn't be banned because to be owner of our lifes must be a fundamental right. We can't decide to be born but why can't we decide when we die?

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ESSAY TO CORRECT: Everyone has the right to decide when and how to die?

Nowadays, euthanasia is a much very dicussed topic. I strongly belive believe that euthanasia must be legal because our body is the only thing that really belong belongs to us therefore we should decide for its destinity. we should decide/we should be ones to decide its destiny
Unfortunately, sometimes our lifes lives became become very difficult, cruel and painful. For example if we suffer an accident or a fire. We can't imagine how tragic it would be if we can't walk, move, talk well, to be dependent forever. In these cases, I think that we aren't losing a life with euthanasia (I don't know what you meant with this but i would say ''I think that, in those cases euthanasia is not a bad thing'') because a big part of his that person died in the accident.
What's more Nonetheless it would be a little selfish not to let a person get out of the pain. If a healthy person can comite commit suicide and we don't provide the means for, for example, quadriplegics to do it, victims would be limited again.

In conclusion, euthanasia wouldn't shouldn't be banned because to be the owner of our lifes your own life must be a fundamental right. We can't decide to be born but why can't we decide when we die?

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