English Practice 2017-04-09
1) Since I decided to lose my weight, It has been over a week until now. In last week, I have done physical exercises and have eaten healthy food everyday. It was a tough time. Because I have done no physical exercise for a long time before last week. After everyday's exercises, I felt very exhausted and every piece of muscle of my body was stiff and sore. Especially, when I was walking and going downstairs, it was very painful. However, with the continuation of working out, the bad feelings have gone. I feel more and more comfortable to do those exercises now. As long as I stick to do this for a week, a month, or even a year, I believe I will be successful in losing weight. After finishing this English practice, I will start my physical exercises again.
2) I like photography. When I reach a new place, I will take many photos of it to record it's beauty. Man's memory is short. We may usually forget the exciting monments and the beautiful things in our lives, as we grows older. What a pity! We may feel our lives is blank, when we become very old. At this time, a photo album will recall your unforgetable memories which makes you laugh or cry. It will be very happy and moving. So I like recording my life's every monmemts by a camera. It is a kind of expression of beauty and life attitude. Additionally, I am also willing to share what I have seen and have hearded with others to bring my happiness to him or her. So I decided to buy a new camera recently and I have settled on a SONY camera. But I feel it is a bit expensive for me to afford. I don't want to ask my parents for help, because I am an adult now and it is very shameful to ask parents for money. Therefore, I will do some part-time jobs to earn some money after school. Hope my wish will come ture.
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English Practice 2017-04-09
1) It's been over a week since I decided to lose my weight. Last week, I did physical exercises and ate healthy food everyday. It was a tough time. Because I hadn't done any physical exercise for a long time before last week. After my daily exercise, I felt very exhausted and every piece of muscle of my body was stiff and sore. Especially, when I walked and went down on stairs, it was very painful. However, going on with exercising, the cramps have gone. I feel more and more comfortable to work out now. As long as I keep on doing this for a week, a month, or even a year, I believe I will be successful losing weight. After finishing this English practice, I will start my physical exercises again.2) I like photography. When I go to a new place, I take many photos to record it's beauty. Man's memory is short. We may usually forget the exciting moments and the beautiful things in our lives, as we grow older. What a pity! We may feel our lives is blank, when we become very old. At that time, a photo album will recall your unforgetable memories which make you laugh or cry. It will be very happy and emotional. So I like recording every moment of my life in a camera. It is a kind of expression of beauty and life attitude. Additionally, I am also willing to share what I have seen and hearded with others to bring my happiness to them. So I've to buy a new camera recently and so I have settled on a SONY camera. But I feel it is a bit expensive for me. I don't want to ask my parents for help, because I am an adult now and it is very shameful to ask parents for money. Therefore, I will do some part-time jobs to make some money after school. Hope my wish will come true.
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