advantages of compulsory insurance
The compulsory insurance is the insurance that government force people who meet certain requirement to buy,otherwise people will get fined or other punishment.
In my opinions,compulsory insurance is more advantages than disadvantages
Most compulsory insurance schemes aim for protection and are really necessary.Most people are short-sighted,which means that they will try to avoid risk in the short term,but in the long term they will not realize risks.However these risks will affect not only their own lives but also the whole society. For example,if superannuation is not compulsory,many people may not save for retirement,because the future is far and uncertain,and they prefer consumption and happiness now.However most people will not have a steady income after retirement,which can increase the burden on the whole family or the government(since people elected the government to improve their lives) dramatically. Therefore compulsory insurance can protect people from future risks that not be realized by themselves.And the same line of reasoning lies in motor insurance and many other compulsory insurance.
Some compulsory insurances can promote social fairness,since they can protect vulnerable party.The most typical example is worker’s compensations. Compared to companies, workers are relatively vulnerable.Without worker’s compensation,workers may not get any compensation when they get injured in work or are in maternity. This is unfair for workers.Therefore it is like a more effective way to regulate the companies to protect employees, because there must be someone compensating the workers.
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Advantages of Compulsory Insurance (Titles should always have capital letters.)
The Compulsory insurance is the insurance that the government forces people who meet certain requirements to buy, otherwise people will get fined or receive other punishments.In my opinions, compulsory insurance is has more advantages than disadvantages
Most compulsory insurance schemes aim for protection and are really necessary. Most people are short-sighted, which means that they will try to avoid risk in the short term, but in the long term they will not realize see the risks. However, these risks will affect not only their own lives but also the whole of society. For example, if superannuation is not compulsory, many people may not save for retirement, because the future is far and uncertain, and they prefer consumption and happiness now. However, most people will not have a steady income after retirement, which can increase the burden on the whole family or the government (since people elected the government to improve their lives) dramatically. Therefore compulsory insurance can protect people from future risks that may not be realized by themselves. And the same line of reasoning lies in motor insurance and many other compulsory insurance.
Some compulsory insurances can promote social fairness, since they can protect the vulnerable party. The most typical example is worker’s compensations. Compared to companies, workers are relatively vulnerable. Without worker’s compensation, workers may not get any compensation when they get injured in at work or are in on maternity leave. This is unfair for workers.Therefore, it is like likely a more effective way to regulate the companies to protect employees, because there must be someone compensating the workers.
After full stops and commas you must have a space, I have put them in for you.
Some of your commas I have removed as the disrupt the flow. If you have any questions about the use of commas please do not hesitate to ask.
This is an excellent piece of writing using some difficult vocabulary, so well done! Charlotte
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