Picnic
Today, I and my friends have a funny day. We go to picnic next to the river and have some activities as: grill the corn, fishing. After that we go to coffee and take a nap to relax.
Enjoy my life!!
If my entry has any mistakes please correct me. Thank you.
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Picnic
Today, my friends and I had a funny day. We went to a picnic next to the river and had some activities, such as: grilling corn, and fishing. After that we got coffee and took a nap to relax.I enjoy my life!!
Nice job! Sounds like a fun day :)
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Picnic
Today, my friends and I have had a funny day. We go to went on a picnic next to the river and have did some activities such as grilling the corn and fishing. After that, we go went to get coffee and took a nap to relax.
If my entry has any mistakes, please correct me. Thank you.
Here you go, Mắt. I'm assuming these events happened already, so I changed everything to past tense. Please let me know if I assumed incorrectly.
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