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Here is my correction. Let me know if you would like to understand why I made some of the changes here. One easy change is to have a space after every period and comma. A Guided Writing As we all know, China suffers from "brain drain" more than any other country these days, although it has the largest labor force. Therefore, excellent people like students who study abroad are truly needed to balance this situation by returning to China. It's fortunate for us that more and more students who studied abroad, chose to come back as 186,000 returnees in 2011. In my opinion, it’s still a good choice to study abroad despite the huge cost, if you have the opportunity. For instance, some students who have talent in their field can choose to study abroad with the help of our country for their cost. No one can deny that we can get an advanced education overseas, which is beneficial for people's development in the future. However, you shouldn't believe that we will achieve our greatest success after studying abroad. It's just a way you can improve yourself. Briefly, studying abroad is a good opportunity to achieve a higher level. Anybody can choose it if you think it suits to you. Of course, we can also succeed through our own efforts without studying abroad.