My first Penicillin G shot
After 7 days suffering with fever i decided go to the doctor. He made some questions, examined my throat and said I had an infection, therefore I would get some antibiotics. Not big deal, right!?
Then I go to ambulatory where they've got my blood sample and I waited there for my shot, one dose of 'Benzetacil", I think you might call it "Penicillin G Benzathine Injection".
Well, that's the part I wanna tell. I've never had that thing before, and trust me, it's a bitch. I was standing, half of my butt exposed, and felt the worst injection of my life. It was like get a Kilogram of cement into my system, burning as it went deep, shreding my tissue and letting my limbs numb.
I cursed a lot, like "oh my gosh, what is this devil?", "shit, what are you doing to me?", and as i went out of the small area isolated by curtains I've noticed all the patients laughing at my response.
I didn't care, it was over for me, i was going home.
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My first Penicillin G shot
After 7 days of suffering with a fever, I decided go to the doctor. He made asked me some questions, examined my throat, and said I had an infection. Therefore, I would get need some antibiotics. Not a big deal, right!? (In proper grammar, you can only use one punctuation mark. In this case, you could use a question mark or an exclamation point, depending on what you want to emphasize, but not both.)Then I go went to ambulatory an outpatienct clinic where they've got my took a blood sample and I waited there for my a shot, one dose of 'Benzetacil." I think you might call it "Penicillin G Benzathine Injection".
Well, that's the part I wanna tell. (Wanna is very casual so be cautious when you use it. Personally, I think it's okay here. You've written a funny story and it fits with how you are telling the story. But "want to" is the correct grammar.) I've never had that thing anything like it before, and trust me, it's a bitch. I was standing, half of my butt half-exposed, and when I felt the worst injection of my life. It was like getting a Kilogram of cement into my system, burning as it went deep, shredding my tissue and letting making my limbs numb.
I cursed a lot, like "Oh my gosh! What is this devil?" and "Shit! What are you doing to me?", and AsI went out of the small area, isolated by curtains, I've noticed all the patients laughing at my response. (I would probably have picked a stronger word than "response." Maybe "laughing at my outbursts.")
I didn't care. It was over. for me, I was going home.
Funny story and well-written!!
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My first Penicillin G shot
After 7 days suffering with fever I decided to go to the doctor. He asked some questions, examined my throat and said I had an infection, therefore I would get some antibiotics. Not a big deal, right!?Then I go to the ambulatory where they've got my blood sample and I waited there for my shot, one dose of 'Benzetacil", I think you might call it "Penicillin G Benzathine Injection".
Well, that's the part I wanna tell. I've never had that thing before, and trust me, it's a bitch. I was standing, half of my butt exposed, and felt the worst injection of my life. It was like getting a kilogram of cement poured into my system, burning as it went deep, shredding my tissue and lettingmaking my limbs numb.
I cursed a lot, like "oh my gosh, what is this devil?", "shit, what are you doing to me?", and as I went out of the small area isolated by curtains I've noticed all the patients laughing at my response.
I didn't care, it was over for me, I was going home.
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A story well-told, with lots of personality!
As for my notes in blue:
What do you mean by the "ambulatory"? The emergency room?
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What an adventure! .... a painful one, though.
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