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Smoking In today's world, many people smoke. I do not smoke, and it makes me happy. This is a global problem in our country. I often see smoking teenagers, young women. I even see pregnant women who smoke Unfortunately, every smoker believes that he will not have disease on account of smoking. I'm really happy for everyone who was able to stop. How dangerous can be it. Alcohol and marijuana, if used in moderation make stress and boredom infinitely more bearable. Most smokers believe it. I smoked a few years, but I quit smoking easily. At one moment, I was smoking, at the next moment I wasn't smoking. I don’t smoke for about five years. I don't have cigarettes in my dreams, I am not embarrassed the smokers around me. Usually I am not a passive smoker. But I know I won't be angry. I’ll just step aside or leave, if possible. We live in a world in which, everyone is responsible for himself. All depends on the person. It is a well-known fact that a sick man is useless. Let's think about tomorrow today. You should have one habit to replace another one, more useful, then you won't have problems. For example, do sports. Every form of addiction is bad, no matter whether the narcotic is alcohol or morphine or ideology.

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Smoking

In today's world, many people smoke. I do not smoke, and it makes me happy.
This is a global problem in our country. I often see smoking teenagers, young women. I even see pregnant women who smoke
Unfortunately, every smoker believes that he will not have disease become ill on account of smoking. I'm really happy for everyone who was able to stop. How dangerous can be it. it can be
Alcohol and marijuana, if used in moderation make stress and boredom infinitely more bearable. Most smokers believe it. this
I smoked for a few years, but I quit smoking easily. At one moment, I was smoking, at the next moment I wasn't smoking.
I don’t smoke haven't smoked  for about five years.
I don't have cigarettes in my dreams, I am not embarrassed the smokers around me.
Usually I am not a passive smoker. But I know I won't be angry. I’ll just step aside or leave, if possible.
We live in a world in which, everyone is responsible for himself. It All depends on the person.
It is a well-known fact that a sick man is useless. Let's think about tomorrow today.
You should have one habit to replace another one, more useful, then you won't have problems. For example, do get involved in sports.
Every form of addiction is bad, no matter whether the narcotic is alcohol or morphine or ideology.

A good piece of writing; phrasing is not a problem for you. Also, a sensible approach to the whole issue. 



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