My special experience in my childhood.

When I studied in elementary school, a teacher said I usually enjoyed (<--注意你的动词时态。) in the dance class, and I had the gift for it. So Knowing this, my parents hired a professional dancing teacher to taught teach me. When I learned better and better kept improving, I thought I could choice the choose to major with in dance in junior high school. So Thus, I studied dance until my first year of high school first grade. During this period, I believed that dancing was my all life.

However, one day, I got received a bad report from the doctor saying that I got had some serious problems with my knee, so I must stop all my activities related to dance. In that time moment, I felt everything was pointless, and feel I sank into depression. Because I thought dancing was already a part of my life, and I had lost my whole dream.

This thing totally depressed me for a long time, until I found another interest in drawing. Then, I felt much better. Because of this, my life back returned to the its original happy state. There were several reasons why my I chose was drawing. One of the most important reasons is that this hobby allowed me to took a rested with my knees. Therefore, even if I gave up my original dream of dancing, I am was happy to accept this new one. Right now, I hope one day that I could become a successful artist in the future. (<--"One day" 和 "in the future" 在这句子里是一个意思，所以只需要一个。)