My son doesn't like to do homework!
My son 's school records are good,but he doesn't like to do homework! He likes to play games,all kinds of the games!He likes to play:poker mahjong mobile games computer games and almost all kinds of outdoor activities!
He cares about playing more than anything else,especially much more than his homework!! I suggest that he can deal with his affair from18:30~21:00,in this time,he must do his work very efficiently.Unfortunately,what bothers me is he never finishing his work up all the times!
In this morning,his teacher sends me a message about his unfinished work.As soon as I watched that message,l feel very angry,but a few minutes later,l considered about my own defect, l realize that maybe i did the wrong time arrangement initially!!
So i will improve my schedule!
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My son doesn't like to do homework!
My son's school records are good, but he doesn't like to do homework! He likes to play games,all kinds of the games! He likes to play: poker, (<--Separate items on a list using a comma.) mahjong, mobile games, computer games, and almost all kinds of outdoor activities!He cares about playing more than anything else, especially much more than his homework!! I suggested that he can deal with his affairs from 18:30 to 21:00,in this time, as long as he must does his work very efficiently. Unfortunately, what bothers me is that he never finishes his work up at all the times!
In This morning, his teacher sent me a message about his unfinished work. As soon as I watched received that message, l felt very angry, but a few minutes later, l considered about my own defect. l realized that maybe I did set the wrong time arrangement initially!!
So Thus, I will improve my and his schedule!
写得不错,刘金蕾!请注意英文的标点符号规则:逗号和句号后面一定要有空格。时态规则也要小心:今天早上发生的事都是过去的事,所以都应该用过去时态。
希望我帮了你忙。有问题请别怕问。
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