For and Against Essay: The advantages and disadvantages of bicycling as a form of transport
Nowadays, there are a lot of cities around the world which bicycling is the main mean of transport, for example Amsterdam. In fact, many people completely agree with using bicycling as a commuting transport. In contrast, others believe that it is not a good idea.
On the one hand, it has a lot of advantages, for example it is the cheapest mean of transport, it can help the environment because it not pollute and the most important is that you can do exercise. You have several options, you can rent a bike or you can buy one.
On the other hand, it has some disadvantages too. One of them is that it could result dangerous because of the traffic. The weather can be another negative aspect if you live in a rainy city
In my opinion, I really think that bicycling is a very good option to move around your city. As a matter of fact, in my city is the best option because the weather and currently, the cycle line is all around the city.
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For and Against Essay: The advantages and disadvantages of bicycling as a form of transport
Nowadays, there are a lot of many (<--"A lot" is considered informal. "Many" is more professional.) cities around the world in which bicycling is the main mean method of transport (for example, Amsterdam). In fact, many people completely agree with using bicycling as a form of transport for commuting transport. In contrast, others believe that it this is not a good idea.
On the one hand, it has a lot of many advantages; for example, it is the cheapest mean of transport, it can help the environment because it does not pollute, and the most importantly, is that you can do cycling is an exercise. You have (<--The generic/impersonal "you" should never be used in writing.) There are several options: you we can rent a bikes or you we can buy one our own.
On the other hand, it has some disadvantages too. One of them is that it could result be dangerous because of the traffic. The weather can be another negative aspect if you a cyclist lives in a rainy city
In my opinion, I really think that bicycling is a very good option to move around your the city. As a matter of fact, in my city, it is the best option because of the weather, and currently, the cycling lines is are all around the city.
Nicely written, Loli! I hope my corrections and notes are helpful for you. I do agree with you: I love cycling, and I try to bike everywhere I can =)
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For and Against Essay: The advantages and disadvantages of bicycling as a form of transport
Nowadays, there are a lot of cities around the world where bicycling is the main mean of transport, eg., Amsterdam. In fact, many people completely agree with using bicycling to commute. In contrast, others believe that it is a bad idea.On the one hand, it has a lot of advantages, for example it is the cheapest means of transport, it can help the environment because it does not pollute and the most important is that you can do exercise. You have several options, you can rent a bike or you can buy one.
On the other hand, it has some disadvantages too. One of them is that it could be dangerous because of the traffic. The weather can be another negative aspect if you live in a rainy city
In my opinion, I really think that bicycling is a very good option to move around your city. As a matter of fact, in my city it is the best option because of the weather and the new cycle lane all around the city.
Very well written!
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