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Is it really important to be physically attractive? Nowadays people spend a lot of time and money to be physically attractive: they buy flashy clothes and jewels, go to the hairdresser’s very often, use make up, try to get fit going to the gym… However, is it the main conditioning factor to make a good impression to the others? On the one hand, it’s true that first impressions are conditioned by physical appearance most of the time, so we have to be careful to with it, especially if we have to do a job interview or we are thinking about dating someone we are really interested in. On the other hand, being attractive is not everything. Our personality and our behavior play an essential role in making a good impression and, although it takes more time to people to know them than to see how we look like, they show who we really are, which is decisive. To sum up, being physically attractive is important in our today’s society but it is worthless if we don’t have more qualities to offer.

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Is it really important to be physically attractive?

Nowadays people spend a lot of time and money to be physically attractive: they buy flashy clothes and jewels, go to the hair salons very often, use make up, try to get fit by going to the gym… However, is it the main conditioning factor to make a good impression to the others?

On the one hand, it’s true that first impression is usually based on our conditioned physical appearance most of the time, and it is really important when people want to appreciate another one. Therefore, we have to be careful to with it, especially if we have to do a job interview or we are thinking about dating with someone who we are really interested in.

On the other hand, being attractive is not everything. Our personality and our behavior play an essential role in making a good impression. Although, it will take more time to understand others' character than to judge them through how they look like, but it will give us a true value.

To sum up, being physically attractive is important in our today’s society but it is worthless if we don’t have any quality to offer.

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