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A paragraph: My favourite musician, singer or band My favourite singer is Adele, who is the most popular singer in the UK. She was born in West Sussex. She came out her first album when she was 19. Nowadays, she won many Grammy and music awards. Adele's music fall in the soul, blues and pop genres. I knew her music is a few years ago when I watched her music video " Rolling in the deep". This video helped her win the MTV Video Music Awards. I love her deep, wide, and quality voice. Her music expresses her experience of life, so it easy to touch my heart. I like to listen her music when I alone. Her music always inspires me. It prompts me to create more ideas when I do design. I will keep listening her music.

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A paragraph: (<--This is way more than one paragraph. You might want to re-title this entry.) My favourite musician, singer, or band

My favourite singer is Adele, who is the most popular singer in the UK. She was born in West Sussex. She came out with her first album when she was 19 nineteen. (<--It's best to write all numbers under 100 as words.) Nowadays, she has won many Grammy and music awards.

Adele's music falls in the soul, blues, and pop genres. I knew her music is was a few years ago when I watched her music video "Rolling in the deep." (<--In English, periods and commas always go inside quotes.) This video helped her win at the MTV Video Music Awards. I love her deep, wide, and quality voice. Her music expresses her life experiences of life, so it is easy for it to touch my heart.

I like to listen to (<--We "hear" music and sounds, but we "listen to" them.) her music when I am alone. Her music always inspires me. It prompts me to create more ideas when I do design. I will keep listening to her music.

Very nicely written, Kin! Your English is impressive! I hope my corrections and notes are helpful. Please let me know if you have any questions =)

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