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An email: A personal description My name is Kin. I'm 172cm tall. My skin colour is yellow and I have black eyes. I have got black and short hair. I would dress grey T-shirt and blue jeans. I'll be there at 6 tomorrow evening. See you there.

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An email: A personal description

My name is Kin. I'm 172 cm tall. I'm Caucasian/I'm fair complexioned and I have black eyes. I have got black and short hair. I'll be in a grey T-shirt and blue jeans. I'll be there at 6 tomorrow evening. See you there.

Good luck, Kin! :)

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An email: A personal description

My name is Kin. I'm 172cm tall. My skin colour is yellow and I have black eyes.
I have got black and short hair. I would dress wear grey T-shirt and blue jeans.
I'll be there at 6 tomorrow evening. See you there.

Hi Kin,

I'm glad to see you writing again :)

Do take note that "yellow" is already a colour. You do not need the "colour" again. For example, you "have black eyes". You will not write "have black colour eyes".

Also, you "wear" grey T-shirt and blue jeans. You don't "dress" T-shirt and blue jeans. However, when you wear formal clothes to an important function, you can "dress up".

Lastly, "have" means a quality that belongs to you. (I have intelligence. I have wisdom. I have long hair) "got" can be used for possession.(I got a job. I got myself a new Mercedes.) In your case, "have" is more suitable.

Hope these help!

Cheers, Lance 

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An email: A personal description

My name is Kin. I'm 172cm tall. My skin colour is yellow and I have black eyes.
I have got black and short hair. I would dress in (or "wear" instead of "dress in") grey T-shirt and blue jeans.
I'll be there at 6 tomorrow evening. See you there then/soon (nothing wrong with saying "see you there". I just want to avoid repetitiveness with the "there" from previous sentence).

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