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A trip to Bangkok Last week, some friends and I went to Bangkok and Koh Samet in TaiLand for a 7 days trip. We only need to wear the shorts due to the hot weather there. We took four days in Bangkok for the tourist attractions like Grand Palace, Wat Pho, Wat Arun and so on. There are so many incredible religious buildings and holy statues with mysterious historical stories which will make people filled with full of respects. Then we went for some walk randomly to see the daily life in Bangkok which makes me feel Thais are friendly. We got kind helps from the local people whenever we were confused by the roads. but the traffic is as bad as in Beijing that we had to keep alarm all the time when we cross a road. One point a little better than Beijing that is the drivers have more patience to wait when you are on the crosswalk. Then we arrived Koh Samet which is a beautiful island after nearly 4 hours drive. We took a motor boat to travel around the island and stay for a while on a beach for seeing the sunset. It was a good trip. Hoping the next trip with my friends.

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A trip to Bangkok

Last week, some friends and I went to Bangkok and Koh Samet in Thailand for a 7 days seven-day trip. We only needed to wear the shorts due to the hot weather there.

We took spent four days in Bangkok for the tourist attractions like Grand Palace, Wat Pho, Wat Arun and so on. There are were so many incredible religious buildings and holy statues with mysterious historical stories which will make people filled fill visitors with full of respects. Then we went for some random walks randomly to see the daily life in Bangkok, which makes helped me feel experience the friendliness of Thais are friendly. We got kind helps received generous help from the local people whenever we were confused by the roads. but However, the traffic is was as bad as in Beijing, that so we still had to keep alarm stay alert all the time at all times when we crossed a road. One point a little better than improvement from Beijing was that is the drivers have more patience to wait when you are we were on the crosswalk.

Then we arrived at Koh Samet, which is a beautiful island, after nearly four (<--100以下的数字最好写英文词。) hours of driving. We took a motor boat to travel around the island and stayed for a while on at a beach for seeing to see the sunset. It was a good trip, and I'm Hoping looking forward to the next trip with my friends.

写得好,Eric!请注意英文的时态规则:既然你所有在泰国做的事都是已经发生了,你应该都用过去时态解释。

希望我帮了你忙。有问题请别怕问 =)

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I also like Thailand.Because there are good memories.Will you go to Thailand again? koh tao is beautiful.Next time you can go and see~~ Are you diving in Koh Samed?? Have you ever been to Khao San Road(考山路) in Bangkok?

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