This morning
Today is a wet and cold day.
It's about to spring but it's still cold like a winter.
I took the bus to my office this morning.
Passengers were quiet and sleepy.
I thought everyone should have a cup of coffee.
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This morning
Today was a wet and cold day.It's about to be Spring but it's still as cold as it was in the like a winter.
I took the bus to my office this morning.
(I'd add: "The") Passengers were quiet and sleepy.
I thought that everyone should have a cup of coffee.
Great job, kind of sounds like a poem.. I made some changes to the tenses as if it were a journal entry.
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This morning
Today is a wet and cold day.It's about to be spring but it's still cold like a winter.
I took the bus to my office this morning.
The passengers were quiet and sleepy.
I thought everyone should have a cup of coffee.
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This morning
Today is a wet and cold day.It's about to almost spring but it's still cold like a winter.
I took the bus to my office this morning.
The Passengers were quiet and sleepy.
I thought everyone should have a cup of coffee.
very nice :)
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