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dangerous sports (Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned,while others think that people should have the freedom to choose the sports activities that they want to do. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.) Today, extreme sports have gained phenomenal popularity among people from all over the world, especially youngsters, which spark a wide controversy whether it should be banned or not. Personal safety is one of the most important reasons why some people advocate to restrict dangerous sports. It is quite true that a part of extreme sports, such as bungee jumping, can raise your potential rate to have heart disease, high blood pressure or something. Therefore, governments may be thought to be responsible for their people’s healthcare by declaring the ban on it. Also, extreme sports are widely considered as a waste of money, for the sports lovers have to buy some necessary and reliable outfits and equipment which are of pretty high price. People can even be in debt if they are totally addicted to them. It is definitely probable since the sports fans are mainly the young, most of which do not have abundant funds. On the other hand, extreme sports are likely to be useful and practical for people who are dedicated to join the army and be special soldiers. Because they are great challenges to toughen people’s brave, courage, flexibility, strength and adjustment, which are valuable characters for a qualified soldier. Another advantage is that it is great fun. People can completely release themselves and immerse themselves in the sense stimuli in order to make them feel alive and hectic again, particularly for people who are under great pressure or find their job tedious and dull. This may be an effective way to help them adapt to this fast- paced society. In conclusion, it is apparent that both advantages and disadvantages exist whether the extreme sports are banned or not. In my point of views, it should be individuals’ very freedom to choose their sports way, yet governments offer relational guidance on these issues at the same time.

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Dangerous Sports

(Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think that people should have the freedom to choose the sports activities that they want to do. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.)

Today, extreme sports have gained phenomenal popularity among people from all over the world, especially youngsters, which sparks a huge wide controversy whether they it should be banned or not.

Personal safety is one of the most important reasons why some people advocate to restrict dangerous sports. It is quite true that some a part of extreme sports, such as bungee jumping, can raise your heart potential rate to result in a have heart disease, high blood pressure or something else. Therefore, governments may be thought to be responsible for their people’s healthcare by declaring a the ban on it. Also, extreme sports are widely considered as a waste of money, for the sports lovers have to buy some necessary and reliable outfits and equipment which are of pretty highly priced. People can even be in debt if they are totally addicted to these sports them. It is definitely likely probable since the sports fans are mainly the young, most of who which do not have abundant funds.

On the other hand, extreme sports are likely to be useful and practical for people who are dedicated to join the army and be become special soldiers. Because they are great challenges to toughen people’s brave braveness, courage, flexibility, strength and adjustment, which are valuable traits characters for a qualified soldier. Another advantage is that it is great fun. People can completely free release themselves and immerse themselves in the sense stimuli in order to make themselves feel alive and energised hectic again, particularly those for people who are under great pressure or find their job tedious and dull. This may be an effective way to help them adapt to this fast-paced society.

In conclusion, it is apparent that both advantages and disadvantages exist whether the extreme sports are banned or not. In my point of view, it should be individuals’ own very freedom to choose the manner of their sports way, while yet governments offer relational guidance on these issues at the same time.

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