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My lunch today We will have chafing dish for lunch today. I went to the super market this morning and bought many food such as muttonchop, beef pieces, spinage, mashroom, potato, fish ball, ect…I like chafing dish, do you?

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My lunch today

We will have a chafing dish for lunch today. I went to the supermarket this morning and bought many food items such as mutton chop, beef slices, spinach, mushroom, potato, fish balls and many others…I like chafing dishes, do you?

Hi Grace, 

I think you must be a connoisseur on food! Just a few items that I edited:

1. Supermarket is a single word. 2. "Food" can be both countable and uncountable. In your sentence, "food" is uncountable, so I added "items" so that "many" can be used.

Cheers, 
Lance

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My lunch today

We will have a chafing dish for lunch today. I went to the supermarket this morning and bought many food such as mutton chop, beef pieces, spinach, mushroom, potato, fish balls, etc. I like chafing dishes. Do you?
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My lunch today

We will have a chafing dish for lunch today. I went to the supermarket this morning and bought many foods, such as mutton chop, beef pieces, spinach, mushrooms, potatoes, fish balls, etc. I like chafing dishes; do you?

Here you go, Grace. Did you enjoy your lunch? 有问题请别怕问 =)

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My lunch today

We will have chafing dish for lunch today. I went to the supermarket this morning and bought some food such as mutton-chops, beef, spinage, mushrooms, potatoes, fish balls, etc … I like chafing dish, do you?

Very well written!

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My lunch today

We will be having chafing dish for lunch today. I went to the super market this morning and bought many different types of food such as muttonchops, beef pieces, spinage spinach, mashroom mushrooms, potato, fish ball, ect etc. I like chafing dish, do you?

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